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Part 1 – The crew of the Eagle’s Lament enjoys a final evening ashore and the stoic Captain Vayne works out some frustration, against her better judgment.
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Download to view. It looks like crap on deviantArt and I can't figure out how to un-crap it. I guess they think all writers write in HTML, using NotePad? Someone want to educate me?
Please feel free to leave any questions, comments or criticisms. If you can, be as specific as possible; I’d much rather hear that a particular character is totally unbelievable and unlikable than a generic, “it sucks.” Feedback on content can and will affect future installments, so if there’s something you’d like to see, speak up!
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It sucks.
Jk!
Jk!